New Track... You'll like it...

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New Track... You'll like it...

Postby ChoppShopp on February 8th, 2010, 2:31 am

http://www.box.net/shared/xbfnbh4rz0

this is the remix.

Majic Ft. Chopp Shopp

I'm on the 3rd verse... Leave a comment! Leave some honest feedback! :)

Thanks for listening!
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Re: New Track... You'll like it...

Postby Alias. on February 9th, 2010, 1:04 am

Even though i'm tired of this type of music, because all these songs sound the same...this shit actually is hot. Hook is hot...it's my favorite part i think. It flows well and it's catchy. Only thing is i thought it was a girl singing at first, is it? I'm not sure, but based on the lyrics i'm assuming it's a dude considering "let me tell you bout my lady," sounds like something a dude would sing right? haha...not sure though. First dude sounds good, not too much goin on, but i'm feelin it. Swag is nice. He sounds pretty polished. Second dude definitely has a catchier flow, and it's alot more polished than the other dude. Delivery sounds nice, lyrics are worthy. Only thing is the voice. It doesn't sound bad or anything...i think it's more the accent, but it's really just a preference, feel me? It's not whack or anything, it's still a hot verse...it's just i guess i'm always in an East Coast state of mind hahaha...But still, very polished song, sounds very radio friendly, good job. Keep it up.
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Re: New Track... You'll like it...

Postby eVaLuShIn on February 9th, 2010, 11:30 am

damn....^^ thats what you call feedback right there...
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Re: New Track... You'll like it...

Postby Insyt on February 9th, 2010, 4:48 pm

too radio for me...

Hook/chorus, its not as catchy as it should be...i think they relied of the talkbox effect to make the hook, lyrics shoulda been switched up to somethin else though in my opinion...


1st dude is ight...coulda hit this a lot better though, sounds like karaoke night...

2nd verse...better than the first...

3rd...U put majic to shame on this bro, i always liked your style wished you would do more hardcore tracks, but u do good pretty much whatever u doing...

This track woulda been a lot better if it was just u chopp...

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Re: New Track... You'll like it...

Postby ChoppShopp on February 10th, 2010, 10:37 pm

Alias. wrote:Even though i'm tired of this type of music, because all these songs sound the same...this shit actually is hot. Hook is hot...it's my favorite part i think. It flows well and it's catchy. Only thing is i thought it was a girl singing at first, is it? I'm not sure, but based on the lyrics i'm assuming it's a dude considering "let me tell you bout my lady," sounds like something a dude would sing right? haha...not sure though. First dude sounds good, not too much goin on, but i'm feelin it. Swag is nice. He sounds pretty polished. Second dude definitely has a catchier flow, and it's alot more polished than the other dude. Delivery sounds nice, lyrics are worthy. Only thing is the voice. It doesn't sound bad or anything...i think it's more the accent, but it's really just a preference, feel me? It's not whack or anything, it's still a hot verse...it's just i guess i'm always in an East Coast state of mind hahaha...But still, very polished song, sounds very radio friendly, good job. Keep it up.


haha.. no it is not a girl! and thanks for the props on my flow and shit.... but you say you're always in an east coast state of mind... well thats cool... but i was raised in the great state of GA and i personally thing my flow is more east coast than anything. my flow is definitely not texas but i been here for 6 or 7 yrs already so maybe its rubbing off on me a little bit.

Thanks for the comment tho... it helped me out with a couple of things i was wondering about.


Insyt wrote:too radio for me...

Hook/chorus, its not as catchy as it should be...i think they relied of the talkbox effect to make the hook, lyrics shoulda been switched up to somethin else though in my opinion...


1st dude is ight...coulda hit this a lot better though, sounds like karaoke night...

2nd verse...better than the first...

3rd...U put majic to shame on this bro, i always liked your style wished you would do more hardcore tracks, but u do good pretty much whatever u doing...

This track woulda been a lot better if it was just u chopp...

Pc,
Syt


haha. thanks bro. well maybe i'll post a couple of my more "hardcore" tracks up here soon. i got some good ones. they still sound commercial but they are definitely some hardcore type of "street" shit.


thanks for the feedback! much appreciated!
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